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DjRin

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i like this

solid arrangement
good buildup..

im feeling the rock!

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks dude

theres one thing im lookin for

a totally climactic explosion of beat and rhythm to accompany that epic wave of melody you are commanding!

otherwise i love

Scooter-16 responds:

Tks for the review and the advice! I'll be sure to think on what you're asking.

Scooter-16

this is tight!!!

think it should get into the beat sooner than at the two minute mark
but other then that im diggin it! you should check out my freefall track its kinda similiar... kinda... well maybe not.. maybe... haha ;) good work

-DjRiN

djInTheDark responds:

Oh, wow, Thank you for bringing that to my attention, I never realized it went one THAT long. I will definitely at a look at that by the way.

Reviews always appreciated!

I think with some polish this could be snazzy

I could definantly see this as a cinematic trailer theme or something like that, with some work.

Like some weepy strings in the back and maybe some more distiguishing features between the bells for the different parts. some reason it reminds me of harry potter. but i like it!

The instruments do allright

but the vocals are buggin me. maybes its jus preference.
the chorus has a good feel to it tho. and the second half of the song is shaping up better than the first.

ah well i think it does alright!

-DjRiN

TheMaskedJew responds:

Well, I'm glad you've written something, but unfortunately it's impenetrably vague. You make no specific comments on melody, harmony, chord progression or rhythm so I can only assume you actually know nothing about music. If you are enraged by the previous statement, I can only tell you to prove me wrong.

I like the potential here

but i think i would have executed it differently
probably started the song off quicker into the melody.

i like the feel goin on here it just seemed a little unpolished to me
but at the same time it knows where its headed. :) good work cadet

-DjRiN

I dont know why but i dig this

theres something here thats workin really good
i cant quite figure it out though.

its got a good background tune feel, like something chill
or it has room for something else to take center stage along side it
hell i think this could be a loop. im diggin!

-DjRiN

=] happy face

i dig it even tho its a lil rough ;) understandable

the vox for the chorus really compliment this piece
solid MCing too, nothin wrong there.

ah well i dig it

Sick intro, take off with it!

That was hella sick! then i read it was meant for hip hop so I realized all that repeating melody was supposed to have an mc backin it up. still i think you should make something sick out of this its got some bamf potential :)

DJ-VIZ responds:

thanks dude, yeah that explains the repitition

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