i like this
solid arrangement
good buildup..
im feeling the rock!
i like this
solid arrangement
good buildup..
im feeling the rock!
Thanks dude
this is tight!!!
think it should get into the beat sooner than at the two minute mark
but other then that im diggin it! you should check out my freefall track its kinda similiar... kinda... well maybe not.. maybe... haha ;) good work
-DjRiN
Oh, wow, Thank you for bringing that to my attention, I never realized it went one THAT long. I will definitely at a look at that by the way.
Reviews always appreciated!
I think with some polish this could be snazzy
I could definantly see this as a cinematic trailer theme or something like that, with some work.
Like some weepy strings in the back and maybe some more distiguishing features between the bells for the different parts. some reason it reminds me of harry potter. but i like it!
The instruments do allright
but the vocals are buggin me. maybes its jus preference.
the chorus has a good feel to it tho. and the second half of the song is shaping up better than the first.
ah well i think it does alright!
-DjRiN
Well, I'm glad you've written something, but unfortunately it's impenetrably vague. You make no specific comments on melody, harmony, chord progression or rhythm so I can only assume you actually know nothing about music. If you are enraged by the previous statement, I can only tell you to prove me wrong.
I like the potential here
but i think i would have executed it differently
probably started the song off quicker into the melody.
i like the feel goin on here it just seemed a little unpolished to me
but at the same time it knows where its headed. :) good work cadet
-DjRiN
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i dig it even tho its a lil rough ;) understandable
the vox for the chorus really compliment this piece
solid MCing too, nothin wrong there.
ah well i dig it
Sick intro, take off with it!
That was hella sick! then i read it was meant for hip hop so I realized all that repeating melody was supposed to have an mc backin it up. still i think you should make something sick out of this its got some bamf potential :)
thanks dude, yeah that explains the repitition
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